Marguerite (Urgent help required please)
My mother passed away this morning. She struggled to recover after a number of falls she had over a few months and doctors eventually found that she had extremely advanced stages of cancer of the...
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Dear Paddy:I'm very sorry. I'll throw out a few thoughts for you to sort through and hope I offer something helpful:Since the conceit is painting, why the "photograph" in L1?It could be:"If I could...
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Thanks StephenExcellent thoughts. I have altered L1 to, "If I could paint a portrait of our Mum," which is easiest to quickly address and works very well, I am spending a bit of time on the other...
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Paddy,I am sorry to hear of your sad loss. I think the only part I would try to work on is the bled\red lines - I wonder if you could do something with rhyming blue\hue.I know this is not particularly...
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Thanks Alan. Mum was in her 84th year so she had a good innings, especially considering that she had so many children and only one set of twins amongst us all. My eldest brother died at age 6, before...
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paddy--little matters but fixing the end; everything else seems true to the heart, & really, what else matters? "Degree" is a mis-step. (why? why ask why? a decree is something given by a distant...
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Paddy I am so sorry ot hear of your loss.I wish I could help you xx
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sorry paddy, can`t help you with the poemdoubly sorry for your loss
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Thanks MikeAs always, your thoughts are right on the money but I didn't manage to read again until now. ISP difficulties. The funeral went very nicely apparently and my brothers will send an audio so...
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